good stuff bro
I really like the progression you've got going, and your grasp on structure is beautiful, especially if this is one of your first songs. The drum sequencing could use a bit of work. But seriously, this is some quality for a first submission :) I i want to hear more like this man, A very beautiful chord change going on near the middle / end
With some better synths this could be phenomenal. Keep it up man seriously, this is good.