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not too bad.

The progression is pretty good, a little on the sad side. Try bringing up or using a different kick to really bring out that punch.
I think the cello adds alot to the entire song as is, i like the way it seems to cut.

Try putting a tiny tiny bit of verb/delay on the pizz strings to give them a tad more feeling.

Seanzyboi responds:

Thanks for the advice

OH SO HAPPY!

I almost peed my pants out of pure excitement with this song! It's so damned happy!!!!

DJKodiPink responds:

yeah i'm well know for happy hyper music XD

not too shabby sir :D

Once you get used to it you'll want to start focusing on mixing and equalization. And then sound selection. when that synth comes in at around :54 or so it's a bit aggressive, kind of loud. (very loud)

I like the song itself though. Good choice of songs to remix :D

Isacc13 responds:

Thanks for the advice. I'll keep trying hard!

What I really need are also some better instrument samples...hmmm....

amazing !

This is absolutely fantastic. Absolutely. This song could be killer as hell.. but that rhythm guitar drone in the background needs its mid-high frequencies dropped a bit so that the lead guitar can come through ! It's far to wonderful to not be heard. This is a fantastic song, I can't stress that enough.
Really, I saw the genre and was like .. oh great, another heavy metal *yawn* then so much emotion and power came through it. Very nice man.

Like I said, hit up that mastering on the heavy rhythm guitar in the background so that you can hear that functional harmony on the lead.

TheRealSam responds:

Thanks for this very helpful review! I'll try as you said! :D
Thanks a lot!!

Good stuff here

The melody is definitely depressing. But as darkmaster said, different sound's would have definitely made this. Unfortunately that fruity slayer is a deal breaker.
9/10 for potential :D

Redrapter responds:

Well I had a depressing moment today so the first thing I thought of was to make a song.
So I opened FL studio and I guess it shows.

Gorgeous!

I'm a sucker for orchestral, this is beautiful. see, about 1:00 minute in is where i'd drop ridiculous drums but that's just how I think.

This is pure beauty. Thank you for this submission :)

Phyrnna responds:

Thank you very much! It's an honor being reviewed by you. Especially since your orchestra far outstrips mine.
I personally still find problems with this, so there's still room for improvement.
Of course, then again, third week of FL here. So yeah. Lots for me to still learn. *total n00b*
You are very welcome Nubbin.

-HFX ^_^

I NEGATE 0 BOMB!!!!

beautiful piano here man. I think you could definitely use a better piano sound, but other than that the actual melody and chords are gorgeous :D

Darkmaster603 responds:

Thank you! would you happen to know any good piano sounds? im stuck using FL keys =(
Thanks for taking the time to listen and review!

Little did you know!

I was browsing new submissions RIGHT when this posted.. This is beautiful man
Seriously brought a tear to my eye.
I love the sound of it. You're nailing those drums and the piano melody is gorgeous.

I can't wait to hear the final version, please keep me posted.

GronmonSE responds:

Oh hey, he miraculously came across it haha, what are the odds?

I think the melody is quite nice myself, although I'm not exactly proud of the drums yet, but thanks :D

I'm not sure if I'll ever finish this, I barely finish WIP's that I submit. But I'll try.

Thanks for the review and for being an inspiration :D

I'll tell you what genre it is

AWESOME! <---

plain and simple, amazing mix in this thing man. Pure amazing. I really don't have much to say about this other than, beautiful.

Developer responds:

Wow! I think this message will get me back to my music! :D
Thank you for your your appreciation! By the way, I hope you solved your problem.

oh my :)

Is this some epic 8 bit ?! I have delved into the 8bit genre meself :D Sir this is indeed epic *(without overdoing it)* :)

very well done, 2:00 minutes makes me want to get up and start slaying bunnies.

Hades responds:

Damn, now you're going to get the animal rights activists on my ass. ;D I'm glad you thought this really turned out to be epic, thanks for the comment!

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