beautiful progression
I was worried at first with the simple melody, but the chords definitely backed it up :D This is a really beautiful song reminds me of flying. When I used to have wings, and fly around. This is kind of what it felt like :)
beautiful progression
I was worried at first with the simple melody, but the chords definitely backed it up :D This is a really beautiful song reminds me of flying. When I used to have wings, and fly around. This is kind of what it felt like :)
Oh yeah, about those wings...
They're selling them at KFC right?
ULUILOOOLO
Thankyou for the review, sorry for the random outburst about fast food but i'm high on piano melodies at the moment :)
Luff you
:3
not too bad.
The progression is pretty good, a little on the sad side. Try bringing up or using a different kick to really bring out that punch.
I think the cello adds alot to the entire song as is, i like the way it seems to cut.
Try putting a tiny tiny bit of verb/delay on the pizz strings to give them a tad more feeling.
Thanks for the advice
OH SO HAPPY!
I almost peed my pants out of pure excitement with this song! It's so damned happy!!!!
yeah i'm well know for happy hyper music XD
not too shabby sir :D
Once you get used to it you'll want to start focusing on mixing and equalization. And then sound selection. when that synth comes in at around :54 or so it's a bit aggressive, kind of loud. (very loud)
I like the song itself though. Good choice of songs to remix :D
Thanks for the advice. I'll keep trying hard!
What I really need are also some better instrument samples...hmmm....
amazing !
This is absolutely fantastic. Absolutely. This song could be killer as hell.. but that rhythm guitar drone in the background needs its mid-high frequencies dropped a bit so that the lead guitar can come through ! It's far to wonderful to not be heard. This is a fantastic song, I can't stress that enough.
Really, I saw the genre and was like .. oh great, another heavy metal *yawn* then so much emotion and power came through it. Very nice man.
Like I said, hit up that mastering on the heavy rhythm guitar in the background so that you can hear that functional harmony on the lead.
Thanks for this very helpful review! I'll try as you said! :D
Thanks a lot!!
Good stuff here
The melody is definitely depressing. But as darkmaster said, different sound's would have definitely made this. Unfortunately that fruity slayer is a deal breaker.
9/10 for potential :D
Well I had a depressing moment today so the first thing I thought of was to make a song.
So I opened FL studio and I guess it shows.
Gorgeous!
I'm a sucker for orchestral, this is beautiful. see, about 1:00 minute in is where i'd drop ridiculous drums but that's just how I think.
This is pure beauty. Thank you for this submission :)
Thank you very much! It's an honor being reviewed by you. Especially since your orchestra far outstrips mine.
I personally still find problems with this, so there's still room for improvement.
Of course, then again, third week of FL here. So yeah. Lots for me to still learn. *total n00b*
You are very welcome Nubbin.
-HFX ^_^
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beautiful piano here man. I think you could definitely use a better piano sound, but other than that the actual melody and chords are gorgeous :D
Thank you! would you happen to know any good piano sounds? im stuck using FL keys =(
Thanks for taking the time to listen and review!
Little did you know!
I was browsing new submissions RIGHT when this posted.. This is beautiful man
Seriously brought a tear to my eye.
I love the sound of it. You're nailing those drums and the piano melody is gorgeous.
I can't wait to hear the final version, please keep me posted.
Oh hey, he miraculously came across it haha, what are the odds?
I think the melody is quite nice myself, although I'm not exactly proud of the drums yet, but thanks :D
I'm not sure if I'll ever finish this, I barely finish WIP's that I submit. But I'll try.
Thanks for the review and for being an inspiration :D
I'll tell you what genre it is
AWESOME! <---
plain and simple, amazing mix in this thing man. Pure amazing. I really don't have much to say about this other than, beautiful.
Wow! I think this message will get me back to my music! :D
Thank you for your your appreciation! By the way, I hope you solved your problem.
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